Board Thread:Consensus Track/@comment-25075055-20140203153514/@comment-25075055-20140208190902

Dovah, comparing your article to an article about a significant event on Wikipedia is invalidating your argument and has no relevance to this discussion. You cannot possibly compare your article to other people's as every article is different. As UAM just pointed out, there is a featured article with just two very short paragraphs. As Ebony also pointed out, she could not read the lead properly because it was just a wall of text. The edit I have made splits up the information and moves most of it into the appropriate section where it belongs.

No, you did not "write a summary of its most important aspects", your lead was essentially a summary of Vivec as a character and not a summary of the article, which made it far too long. All the lead needs to be, on this wiki, is a short paraphrase of the article in question. The information you wrote is still there, just under a section called Background, which is what ALL articles are supposed to be like.

This is the standard used on every other page on this wiki, the Vivec page I mentioned will not be exempted just because you wrote it. :/