Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-32837054-20170812092939

I wanted to write down my character so i would not forget it, so why not post it where everyone can see it and tell me how bad it is!

It all starts with the little Argonian named Magdros (yes i use it for my username because i'm terible at creating names) born near the coast of black marsh in the fourth era. He didn't learn much Jel, for the tribe he was in was used as a trading port.(my exuse for not knowing much Jel) Lets just skip to the good(ish) part. While running through the trees with his brother(because runing through treetops is a verry safe thing to do) he started to become verry reckless and triped, almost falling to his death, but thankfuly his brother caught him right in time! YAAAA HAPPY ENDING! NOPE, the weight of two small argonians on a weak branch is a recipe for death. The branch snaps, un-named (for now) brother throws Magdros to a nearby branch, then un-named bro falls to his death. Little Mag runs to his now deceased brother and cries out for help. hours, many hours pass, but no one arived. Little Mag,now starving, looks at the slightly fresh courpse of his dead brother. The courpse looks more and more apitizeing by the minuite. Finaly, he breaks down and has a lovely meal of dead brother. After his apitite is quenched, Little Mag realizes what he has done and passes out from fear. Latter, a  middle aged Redguard named Brandye, who was Mag's friend, stumbles across the bloody mess while looking for the two brothers. He burrys the mostly eaten brother and washes off mostly bloodied Magdros. After the incodent, Little Mag only remembers his brother falling, (*cough* cleche *cough*) blames himself. Only Brandye and Mag's father know about what happend after. Years pass and Little Mag becomes a STRAPING... quite weak and slightly larger Magdros. The time comes when Mag's father tells him to leave home, for his (*cough*) I GET IT!) "Destiny" lies elsewhere. Knowing that Magros wasn't strong enugh to carry a greatsword around, his father trains (CHOO CHOO) him in the way of the spell-sword and gives him a parting gift of a spellbook of flames.

Well, thats it for now. It's five in the morning and i think i should get some sleep. I'll add the extra stuff later, like him haveing a part deadric soul (yes there is an explanation, and no it's acualy quite useless) 