Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-12599067-20141127202735/@comment-11457306-20150110002033

(Your work is not mediorce, Billy.  I don't believe I ever said that.  I was only trying to convey that it was too complex for an RP.  In a novel or fan fiction, it would be very interesting.  You are a very good writer.  You think up good plot lines and good twists, but it takes way too long to work through them in this venue.

I could go back and delete Conall trying to kill the necromancer and Kasra taking Varenwen hostage. Conall's next move would be to throw up his hands and say that unless anyone has any ideas, they'd best go back to Ranulf and report their failure. That is all I can think of to do. I cannot think of a way to persuade such a man to help. I already threw out my best idea and he refused it. I'm scraping the bottom of the barrel here.)