Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-29559990-20141227174339/@comment-12599067-20141228160203

(Hold up, Hazard. If I may offer some advice. Try to execute actions through non-dialogue. Also, dialogue is in quotations, but not parentheses. Also, each sentence does not need to be it's own set of dialogue, unless that's an intentional thing meant to add extra effect.)

(For example: Jim went to Subway to order a sandwich, since he likes sandwiches.

"They make good sandwiches here. Most of the time, anyways," said Jim to Joe. "Too bad this waiter doesn't seem to know what he's doing.")