Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-10906938-20140218020301/@comment-11457306-20140220000907

(Thank you, Shilly.  I don't remember covering that particular aspect of literary technique but my creative writing classes are way back in the dim past...I think it more likely the nun would have whacked me with her ruler and told me to figure out how to say it a different way.)

M'Nara jumped awake, gripping her swords, then realized her antagonist was just a little girl. "I--already ate.  I was tired, so I fell asleep." She smiled at the child. "Why are you over here and not with your family, eating?"