Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-24524076-20160803200831/@comment-24524076-20161122020346

...alright, where did I mess up this time? You guys [Moonunitiv and Pelagius the Geek] don't really stop responding unless you have a complaint.

Ok, so I wrapped up the Arcadia thing a bit too swiftly, perhaps, condensing it to one single post. Did it seem like railroading? It was less trying to force a story (I don't exactly do too much forward-planning with characters I'm not sure are going to be around long - I tend to write them as we go, so the whole "Jarl's Alchemist" was just as sudden in my processes as they were in reading), more just taking a break from Jabari to demonstrate he's not too unhinged, so when left to think like that...

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Sorry if that's the issue. Just... maybe actually say the issue next time instead of dissipating without a trace...

[And, sorry, VengarIshand, I like to wait for at least two people to put in their two cents before making a story post. Nothing personal.]