Talk:Stormcloaks

Strange introduction.
Poorly Written.

"Kids, Womans, Men." and "Many families lost familiars." Im sorry, what?

Furthermore, this article is written as though it is canonically established that the Stormcloaks lose the civil war. I was unaware of this. I was under the distinct impression that if you join the Stormcloaks they win. In essence I believe this article is in need of cleaning up.

131.104.13.41 17:30, November 15, 2011 (UTC)Concerned Reader