Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-24736819-20140921013227/@comment-24530992-20140921143223

"I don't suppose I need to make too many changes, but give mere suggestions. Up on the roof, try shifting your weight to maintain a better balance, and when landing, land as centered as possible, or you can risk breaking something.. Now, is there anything you think you could improve on? If so, what is it?" Xander asked.

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Corvo stepped out and away fromt he blade lock to avoid the stab, where he sighed.

"Training, not killing." He said, swinging again.