User blog comment:Cabb/Skyrim/@comment-1277956-20111127085333

Hiya Cab. Please ignore the ignorant comments. You have a good idea of writing your adventure in-game as a story. The inclusion of the pictures is a nice touch. If I may offer some suggestions, run it through MS Word to clean up the spelling and grammar errors. Also, sectioning it up into more manageable paragraphs will improve readability. Or you can use the wiki headers to break up the sections. Keep up the good work DLanyon (talk) 08:53, November 27, 2011 (UTC)