Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-29559990-20141227174339/@comment-1592115-20141228160600

Lab Coat Billy wrote: (Hold up, Hazard. If I may offer some advice. Try to execute actions through non-dialogue. Also, dialogue is in quotations, but not parentheses. Also, each sentence does not need to be it's own set of dialogue, unless that's an intentional thing meant to add extra effect.)

(For example: Jim went to Subway to order a sandwich, since he likes sandwiches.

"They make good sandwiches here. Most of the time, anyways," said Jim to Joe. "Too bad this waiter doesn't seem to know what he's doing.")

The "dialogues" are in parenthese because Haz didn't actually speak out them, just thinking in his mind because he's meant to be silent.