Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-11296535-20140329042442/@comment-24810427-20140401232954

Vivienne Von Vanity wrote: Awesomeking13 wrote: Wakes up in a jail cell.

" What Happen." Bildam said.

" It's about time you woke up Elf." A Guard said. " We found you near are prison so you will rot in jail Elf." The guard walks away from the cell. (Sorry for intruding again. I just wanted to tell you that this was a really good post. If I were to make a suggestion, I would advise more commas, and the deletion of one "Elf," but other than that, well done!) ( Thanks ! )