Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-6193778-20130523021636/@comment-71.61.178.23-20130524145023

Ma' is a prefix for names meaning "child" or "young". So realistically the child should be named Ma'isha. Aki' as a prefix doesn't appear on the list at all. Also, you made the child the speaking Khajiit's first, but then Ma'isha's instead. And there are lots of grammar and spelling mistakes. Please understand that I am offering advice and not insulting you or your writing. The plot itself is quite good.