Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-11296535-20140329042442/@comment-25012303-20140401231154

Awesomeking13 wrote: Bildam trys to walk away from the prison then all of sudden he got knocked out (I really like your imaginative style. Might I suggest that you say, "Bildam, attempts to depart from the person's entrance, when suddenly, he is knocked unconscious."

Again, impressive work. I can't wait to read more! :}