User blog comment:TheSkyrimAddict/Change of topic./@comment-4644719-20111209020450

This was a good story, I enjoyed reading it. However, your paragraphs are a bit long, try spacing them out as you begin a new thought. That will make it easier to read.

Another thing I'd suggest doing is always reading over your work before publishing. It doesn't make you sound smart if you misspell or miss a capitalization.

I personally try to avoid the area around the Labyrinthian, I got jumped by three trolls at a low level in that area and wasted at least two hundred arrows trying to kill them before I realized that they were regenerating. That was a serious pain.

Keep up the good fight!