Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-9062114-20140317053628/@comment-4360975-20140329231737

Tomsworld wrote: Character:

Name: Tom the unseen

Race: Nord

Height: 6,6'

Weight: 300 lbs

Hair Color: medium-dark brown

Eye Color: Blue

Age: 27

Apparel: Shrouded Hood, Guild Masters boots (everyone in the theives guild seems to have them) , linwes chestpiece, shrouded gloves.

Weapons: if its allowed the Azure Aura (http://tinyurl.com/oznypr6) else the blade of woe

Major Skills: Sneak, Lockpicking pickpocket

Minor Skills: One Handed weapon Archery

Powers: shadow stone

Spells: Candlelight

Bio: From a young age (after bandits killed his parents) Tom had to learn to survive on his own. He soon learned that stealing food was alot easier that earning it. After years of robbing people a man aproached him in the city of Riften and asked him to join the thieves guild... He did. The guild had made him rich, they had gave him armor and a warmish bed however one day the dragonborn burst in and destroyed the guild with the survivors escaping to the far corners of skyrim. Tom ran to solitude where he bought a house and married. But one day a guard commented as he walked by, he said "wait I know you..." the guard had him locked up for thievery tresspassing triple murder (may of killed a dark brotherhood assassin and a couple of farmers) and laughing at an arrow to the knee guard. It was here he was recruted into the frostfall guild and this leads us to now...

(Is there any way you could use a more lore friendly first name? Nords tend to have Norse names, so you could find one and use it or you could use the Tamriel Rebuilt name generator to get a good name. Disregard the titles (e.g. Ergnin the Keen-eyed) on there if you want to keep "the Unseen," but the names are pretty good.

Lastly, your story is a little canon-contradicting. The Thieves' Guild can't be destroyed in-game, so you can't say that the Dragonborn destroyed it reasonably. Also, laughing at a guard who made the classic, overly popular "arrow to the knee" comment wouldn't be a punishable offense. Hope this helps!)