Board Thread:Lore Discussion/@comment-3076045-20131030144607/@comment-3186827-20131108113238

Jett Cyber wrote: So...can I add my page now? I forgot to get back to you.

Ok some constructive criticism, your CHIM sandbox needs some work - its too basic and only touches on such a complex subject. It has zero references firstly - you need to identify the in-game sources and and OOG sources.

The Sermons are a big part of CHIM and you would need to go though these and identify the parts that relate to CHIM and write these into the page - that itself is a hard task because the sermons are so obscure.

Other parts need reworded - for example "he is but a small part of a part of a part of a part of a part." is not good. The part where you explain Zero-summing with all the quotes is a unencyclopedic.

CHIM isn't the sort of thing you can write in an hour or so - an incomplete or inaccurate lore page is bad for the wiki. Collaboration with other users is a good idea - like I said message Sajuuk and ask him for input and keep working on the sandbox.