Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-16047389-20131113192401/@comment-16047389-20131209194303

This is the story created after I went through and did my best to make sense out of it. Several words were cut or added in to try and make sense of what we had. It wasn't that successful, as I was also trying to preserve most of the input while trying to at the very least make it legible. Highly unsuccessful.

My Conclusion:

Too many people are concerned with trying to get what they believe is the last word in to a sentence, when they should be trying to make sense. There are so many sentences in here that could've been funny, but were ruined because someone else felt they had to throw in another word that doesn't even make sense. Yea, being the guy to add "." may not be that fun, but deep down, we all thank you for doing so. We thank you, because it means we won't have sentences that run on and on and on without end. I'm not asking that we cut back on the weirdness of this. But it would help if we just started new sentences earlier on, and at the very least read what the last word was, so we don't get the words "his, Alduin's, himself" in a row.

One more thing, I would like everyone to use quotations around their words. I know most of you do, but the few of you who don't make going through this and compiling it more difficult on me. So from here on, if you don't use quotations around the word, I'm just going to skip over it.

So basically, use more ".", and make sure your word works with the previous one.