I’m going to close my fandom account and make a new one. I’m trying to consolidate all my accounts across different websites under the same username.
Be back soon. And if this fails terribly. Be back in 30 days.
I saw one of my friends who passed away a few years ago in my dream last night. He was my childhood friend, and I knew him growing up.
We were in a place with light and water and pillars. Ivory platforms on top of water. He looked good, a little thin but good, like he’s been busy. He gave me a big hug and called me ‘Jeshua’ for some reason. He told me he’s been working on some stuff and I told him I’ve been writing.
I invited him over on January 18th & February 8th. He told me he was busy on the 7th but then I woke up.
From the sound of it, it seemed like he had people looking after him.
Yeah, it does 😂. But in my stories Nirnroot is basically marijuana. (It also whispers instead of rings) hehe
Hell yeah, keep it up. I’m almost done with Chrysanthemum. Anthelis and Paradise of the False God are only in their early chapters.
You should upload to FanFiction Net and Archiveofourown to reach a larger audience!
Awe I love that. Ren is my favorite so far. I wonder what she exactly looks like tho.
As for my boys, Krest and Stesha are kinda characters I just made up. Well, there’s a little more to Krest than meets the eye but I’ll keep that secret for now. And obviously, Verus was inspired by Islam Makhachev, the best fighter alive.
And I even started the first chapter of that Dwarven Dystopia, whose main character is a woman named Haniel. (Still figuring out her personality. She does smoke Nirnroot to get high tho!)
A very well written chapter. Short but full of interesting details and backstory. Drenvoth’s backstory with Haliette is gut wrenching, and really makes me wonder what direction his character will go in. Ren being nice to the young man was also nice, showed she can be compassionate :)
I was wondering if I could somehow work your usernames into my story. As a little nod of appreciation.
I wonder… I solemnly swear I am up to no good!
^Drenvoth’s locket
A neat, knit chapter. Nice interaction between Ren and Svarash. Ren being guided by her morals is a good characteristic. Curious what that amulet was though…
The Basilisk
^^I know what you mean. A break can be a good thing. Hope it all goes well. I also left for a while.
Anyone have any ideas for a compelling title for a fanfic that revolves around a Dwarven dystopia set in the 6th era?
So far I’ve come up with
Zuun Do Idium
Paradise of the False God
The Ivory One
Veiled In Brass
Updates:
Alhana and a character named Juliek being added back in
Changing title to Anthelis because Anthos & Amaranth are too common
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I’m having another idea for a story. A long time ago I wrote a Dwarven dystopia novel. It was horrendous but it was my second attempt at writing a story and I was only 18. Now I’m 24.
I’m thinking of using that concept again and creating a bleak dystopian world where the Dwemer rule. The Chrysanthemum is also a dystopia of sorts but not the traditional type. (Society is on the verge of collapse type). This Dwarven dystopia will be a traditional dystopia set in the 6th era where the dwarves return and take over.
The protagonist will likely be a wood elf woman or a akaviri woman. Probably wood elf.
The primary antagonist will be a mysterious figure known as The Ivory One — whose true identity is unknown by the audience and the people of Tamriel.
The working title is Zuun Do Idium (which means Paradise of the False God).
No worries, I’ll be here for it!
Hmm, I’m really curious what’s at the heart of this mystery. How many chapters are you planning to write? — This is getting good and I’m excited.
The woman knew she was gonna die. Which is strange because vampires attacked her. I like this smaller scale type of mystery. Curious for more!
Another read from Pearl Lunar is a melody sung where the moonlight lives!
Good chapter. Things are getting more interesting and the character interactions are really solid. Ren’s determination bleeds through every action and word she speaks, adding to her likability as a character. Excited for the next chapter!
The Ajorka mystery is really fun to explore.
The poem was inspired by the song, dried flower by wave to earth.
https://youtu.be/jGYzO6clodg?si=p41Wwa_2hah4ylZ2
I wrote this poem.
Dried Flower
Little dried flower
One who's slipped through the surface
Into the hell below
You wither on the edge
Without water, love, or light
You're nourished only by hate and pain
Your will to live and grow is gone
You're just fighting on
Waiting for this hell to consume you
So you can enter a perfect place
With rivers of water and wine
And be with someone who cares
Little dried flower, after you've left this world
You will taste the finest wine
And see the brightest lights
And be loved by the strongest love
An excellent read. I’ll get my constructive feedback out of the way first then get to what I liked.
In the beginning it was kinda hard to differentiate the characters from one another. I recommend spacing out your paragraphs when a character is being described or speaking.
Now, I hope that wasn’t too harsh. Onto my thoughts:
You are a good writer. That little twist at the end makes me want to read more. Ajorka being dead and now possibly alive? Very interesting. I liked Ren’s character a lot. Stoic, cold, hardened by the world it seems.
Your characterizations were good too and as the story progressed it was easier and easier to distinguish the characters.
I’m eager to read more. You have a talent for this!
Happy birthday!!